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I was a unsure after we finnished the rough cut as to weather it was genuinly not very good or weather i was doing what i often do and being far to over critical of my own work. To give me a clearer picture i showed it to some friends, some with media experience and some without and most of them said a similar sort of thing, that it had it's strong points and had potential to be okay but wasn't very interesting and lacked pace. 

I thought these were fair points and fully agreed with them, a few people said that the track wasn't a good choice but this is one point that i strongly disagree with. i think the track is a very strong one and sets exactly the type of atmosphere i wanted to give the video. I wanted something that would have a fairly stripped back sound to it but had enough pace in the beat to give me something to cut quickly too.